Well this was certainly a spicy femdom story introduction from start to finish. That's a genuine compliment. I did read the other comments, and whether you want to run with that concept is up to you, but it at least did deliver quite excellently there throughout.
But its rare for projects like these to have high-quality animations. While short in length, you can certainly see that there is a lot of latent talent here. If the tempo can be kept, this could be a future contender for one of the big visual novels on Itch.
P.S. this 1-day old VN project ended up being in the number #2 spot for that tag on the front page as of this moment. Certain niche tags shared by other projects are good way to get some hard-to-get visibility. It might also help clear up a lot of confusion about what this project will contain in the future--such as whether its going to be a sandbox, kinetic novel, or a choices matter novel, etc.
I usually rarely comment, but I feel the need to drop a few words. First of all, unlike most Ren'py games comprised of illusion studio game for graphic, this game feels very polished. The developer takes a lot of extra steps to make this game stands out, things like but not limited to :
Animations for NOT ONLY 18+ scenes, but also cutscenes and other story elements
A customized menu
Texts flourish to further emphasize the dialogue and make them more 'alive' (Little things like making them bigger and smaller, etc. The dev explains it best when you boot up a new game
All of these already makes them game very appealing visually, and helps it stands out among the others. I hope this features are kept for future updates. Good job!
The writing so far is also great. It doesn't feel immature or forced, it's enjoyable, written with tact, and leaves the reader rooms for imagination and deduction while still being concise on what the reader needs to know.
There is quite a lot of femdom content for now, but personally I enjoy and prefer them so that's not really a negative, more of a positive for me.
Overall, I feel like this game is full of potential, and is made by someone who would go the extra length to bring out the best in their craft (at least for now). Hope you can keep the ball rolling Cibbon, and best of luck!
Well, on a scale of 1-to-10 difficulty, the main character's situation is 11/10 completely and utterly hopeless long-term for freedom.
The succubus goddess is all-powerful in her pocket dimension. He's already been infected with her mark. Her most zealous and emotionally-bonded servant is literally hovering over his shoulder ensuring compliance with physical force at all times. What few powers the main character has derive from his overlord directly and could probably be taken away on a whim. And he'd also need a way to overcome her ability to influence and reprogram emotions hypnotically. It seems to even be implied that if he rebels, a hex will automatically activate (maybe?) and curse him for eternity, violating the contract he signed.
Compounding everything, there's nothing left of his home to return to. The central government of the kingdom he's been isekai'd to literally worships the person who enslaved him as a deity and as a matter of national identity--the "succubus kingdom" as in the title of this project I'd assume. By extension any followers he recruits there will likely adore her too.
This MC is basically stuck here for the ride and is probably limited to trying to make best and enjoy his situation--plenty of action there. How you'd write a rebellion route out of this, I'd have no clue. At best he could strike a deal with one of the other four supreme beings vying for power, but he'd basically be trading one succubus mistress for another with a new binding contract.
Who knows, maybe with that tagline its like an ancient classical Greek tragedy where the hero tries to break the chains of fate but inevitably fails and is punished constantly by the divine for doing so.
Not everything is always straightforward or even successful.
The only thing more powerful than a Goddess in fictional work, is her writer that wants to see her knocked down a peg.
So the intentions of the writer, are much more important to the direction of the story, than the fictional details of the setting within that story.
And given that the writer has thus far, just... completely ignored my inquiry at all, both times I've asked about, sorta suggest to me that if you're signing up for servicing aforementioned Succubus Mistress, what you are instead signing yourself up for is a big heaping plate of disappointment. Which, you know, as said.. huge bummer, but whatcha gonna do?
Patreon link doesn't seem to link to a proper page.
Overall this storyline seems promising. Good animations. Not sure if its planned to be one of the main focuses of the novel, but based on what exists in this prologue, it ought to have a "femdom" as one of its tags on Itch. The protagonist certainly seems to end up being on the bottom a lot.
Not just the scenes, but the plot, setting, and atmosphere is certainly there for it too.
The main character is literally given the title "slave", is branded, and bullied by a dominant hot succubus-waifu. He gets beaten and dominated by a bunch of battle maids too. They all talk about endurance training him in the future as some sort of foreshadowing. He's on a short leash as he's given his mission. The outer plot has already deep-dived into this theme.
The inner plot too: A hot queen on a throne who doesn't seem to outright deny that she keeps certain assets. The main character rescues someone, but still manages to end up under her anyways! And then followed by a long T&D session out of his control without spoiling anything. And so forth, all while under the scornful gaze of a mean--but well-endowed--goth girl.
Not making a judgement here, just suggesting to keep an open mind as the project tries to find its initial footing that it ticks a lot of boxes to a certain niche taste. Some folks are really into that. Advertising what it already excels at might help build up some initial momentum. Maybe it was unintended (I would guess you were aiming for a corruption theme initially), but accidents can be happy accidents. Don't be afraid to go either way.
Still, will be looking forward to how this story develops with content, routes, options, etc. Good luck!
I imagined Mc was going to be something of a loser, but the way you describe how things happen is worse than I thought haha, thanks for that description.
Its a hard judgement to make. The MC does stand up for himself, but has the rebelliousness physically beaten out of him. His initial emotional weakness from the sudden turn of events is also quite literally hypnotized out of him so he can serve better as both a personal slave toy and a knight.
It's probably too early to call and will depend on future story version beats. But before the whole adventure, he was down on his luck before being whisked away. Its all out of his control now, and there is a small comedy of errors happening because of all these circumstances outside his control.
And is it possible to avoid, that is, not to happen at all, those scenes? If it isn't possible, the truth is that I don't care if they cease to exist later, because being forced to have a single femdom scene is enough for me not to play.
Its basically you got isekai'd, but semi-voluntarily in a coerced fashion. Outside of the whole being enslaved aspect, there's nothing "extreme" if that's what you're worried about, but just know that you're basically starting from zero in terms of power level and you're surrounded by some "superior beings" who have their way with you initially. It kind of sets up the plot if that makes sense, so it'd be a bit weird to skip it. Its mild basically insofar, but omnipresent for the meantime while the MC starts the journey.
I would kind of consider the whole being "almost beaten to death" part just a little extreme for some people on the fence, but it did happen mostly off-camera.
Well the whole storyline begins with being thoroughly dommed (enslaved) by a feisty succubus. Its not just a scene, but the entire premise starts with it.
If that makes some people uncomfortable, they should probably skip over it then. She seems to be central to the plot and will likely reappear again.
But as a hard dom, she is quite the attraction though.
Your description of the game hasn't ignited my desire to play. I would say that it has rather chilled it to the point of freezing. I guess it's best to not even download it.
First I must say that the girls' models look good, but that overview and previews give me the impression that the MC is going to be the typical loser forced to do X thing for X updates until he finally gains some power to say No.(which makes me wonder if this is a femdom/sub focused game?)
So, Dev, how much freedom does the player have?
For example, are kinks/fetishes avoidable (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?
And what about future tags or content, do you have any idea what the game will have, or will it depend on demand? (if possible it would be good to have a list of tags planned)
I mean kinda I guess. So other than Yuna(Pink Succubus) most relationships will be much more "normal". So no, the game in general is not femdom/sub focused. The previews are a little misleading, mostly because almost all the content so far involves Yuna.
My current plan for sex scenes is for the player to choose between a normal scene or a fetish scene. So for example, they can either have a blowjob or a footjob.
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I don't see very many VN's with the ability to change ur skin color, if this could be added it would make the experience that much better
i dont mean to be picky, i just fell it would add to the overall depth of the story! ;)
Well this was certainly a spicy femdom story introduction from start to finish. That's a genuine compliment. I did read the other comments, and whether you want to run with that concept is up to you, but it at least did deliver quite excellently there throughout.
But its rare for projects like these to have high-quality animations. While short in length, you can certainly see that there is a lot of latent talent here. If the tempo can be kept, this could be a future contender for one of the big visual novels on Itch.
P.S. this 1-day old VN project ended up being in the number #2 spot for that tag on the front page as of this moment. Certain niche tags shared by other projects are good way to get some hard-to-get visibility. It might also help clear up a lot of confusion about what this project will contain in the future--such as whether its going to be a sandbox, kinetic novel, or a choices matter novel, etc.
I really like the visuals of the game but i have a doubt is this game heavy femdom focused or you can avoid that scenes ?
its about succubus its gonna have femdom
I usually rarely comment, but I feel the need to drop a few words. First of all, unlike most Ren'py games comprised of illusion studio game for graphic, this game feels very polished. The developer takes a lot of extra steps to make this game stands out, things like but not limited to :
All of these already makes them game very appealing visually, and helps it stands out among the others. I hope this features are kept for future updates. Good job!
The writing so far is also great. It doesn't feel immature or forced, it's enjoyable, written with tact, and leaves the reader rooms for imagination and deduction while still being concise on what the reader needs to know.
There is quite a lot of femdom content for now, but personally I enjoy and prefer them so that's not really a negative, more of a positive for me.
Overall, I feel like this game is full of potential, and is made by someone who would go the extra length to bring out the best in their craft (at least for now). Hope you can keep the ball rolling Cibbon, and best of luck!
Thank you so much!
I can assure you that this level of quality will continue
"...or will you remain as her obedient servant?"
So is that actually a route you're planning, or just part of the tag line?
Win win either way
Speaking personally, it'll be more of a win for me if that is an option, than if it isn't
Though I'm starting to feel like, it isn't an option, which is a huge bummer actually
Well, on a scale of 1-to-10 difficulty, the main character's situation is 11/10 completely and utterly hopeless long-term for freedom.
The succubus goddess is all-powerful in her pocket dimension. He's already been infected with her mark. Her most zealous and emotionally-bonded servant is literally hovering over his shoulder ensuring compliance with physical force at all times. What few powers the main character has derive from his overlord directly and could probably be taken away on a whim. And he'd also need a way to overcome her ability to influence and reprogram emotions hypnotically. It seems to even be implied that if he rebels, a hex will automatically activate (maybe?) and curse him for eternity, violating the contract he signed.
Compounding everything, there's nothing left of his home to return to. The central government of the kingdom he's been isekai'd to literally worships the person who enslaved him as a deity and as a matter of national identity--the "succubus kingdom" as in the title of this project I'd assume. By extension any followers he recruits there will likely adore her too.
This MC is basically stuck here for the ride and is probably limited to trying to make best and enjoy his situation--plenty of action there. How you'd write a rebellion route out of this, I'd have no clue. At best he could strike a deal with one of the other four supreme beings vying for power, but he'd basically be trading one succubus mistress for another with a new binding contract.
Who knows, maybe with that tagline its like an ancient classical Greek tragedy where the hero tries to break the chains of fate but inevitably fails and is punished constantly by the divine for doing so.
Not everything is always straightforward or even successful.
The only thing more powerful than a Goddess in fictional work, is her writer that wants to see her knocked down a peg.
So the intentions of the writer, are much more important to the direction of the story, than the fictional details of the setting within that story.
And given that the writer has thus far, just... completely ignored my inquiry at all, both times I've asked about, sorta suggest to me that if you're signing up for servicing aforementioned Succubus Mistress, what you are instead signing yourself up for is a big heaping plate of disappointment. Which, you know, as said.. huge bummer, but whatcha gonna do?
Patreon link doesn't seem to link to a proper page.
Overall this storyline seems promising. Good animations. Not sure if its planned to be one of the main focuses of the novel, but based on what exists in this prologue, it ought to have a "femdom" as one of its tags on Itch. The protagonist certainly seems to end up being on the bottom a lot.
Yeah the Patreon page is currently under review, Hopefully, it will soon be up and running
I agree that the first scenes have been very femdom focused, but the rest of the game will have less of that.
Not just the scenes, but the plot, setting, and atmosphere is certainly there for it too.
The main character is literally given the title "slave", is branded, and bullied by a dominant hot succubus-waifu. He gets beaten and dominated by a bunch of battle maids too. They all talk about endurance training him in the future as some sort of foreshadowing. He's on a short leash as he's given his mission. The outer plot has already deep-dived into this theme.
The inner plot too: A hot queen on a throne who doesn't seem to outright deny that she keeps certain assets. The main character rescues someone, but still manages to end up under her anyways! And then followed by a long T&D session out of his control without spoiling anything. And so forth, all while under the scornful gaze of a mean--but well-endowed--goth girl.
Not making a judgement here, just suggesting to keep an open mind as the project tries to find its initial footing that it ticks a lot of boxes to a certain niche taste. Some folks are really into that. Advertising what it already excels at might help build up some initial momentum. Maybe it was unintended (I would guess you were aiming for a corruption theme initially), but accidents can be happy accidents. Don't be afraid to go either way.
Still, will be looking forward to how this story develops with content, routes, options, etc. Good luck!
I imagined Mc was going to be something of a loser, but the way you describe how things happen is worse than I thought haha, thanks for that description.
Its a hard judgement to make. The MC does stand up for himself, but has the rebelliousness physically beaten out of him. His initial emotional weakness from the sudden turn of events is also quite literally hypnotized out of him so he can serve better as both a personal slave toy and a knight.
It's probably too early to call and will depend on future story version beats. But before the whole adventure, he was down on his luck before being whisked away. Its all out of his control now, and there is a small comedy of errors happening because of all these circumstances outside his control.
And is it possible to avoid, that is, not to happen at all, those scenes? If it isn't possible, the truth is that I don't care if they cease to exist later, because being forced to have a single femdom scene is enough for me not to play.
If you're on the fence about trying it:
Its basically you got isekai'd, but semi-voluntarily in a coerced fashion. Outside of the whole being enslaved aspect, there's nothing "extreme" if that's what you're worried about, but just know that you're basically starting from zero in terms of power level and you're surrounded by some "superior beings" who have their way with you initially. It kind of sets up the plot if that makes sense, so it'd be a bit weird to skip it. Its mild basically insofar, but omnipresent for the meantime while the MC starts the journey.
I would kind of consider the whole being "almost beaten to death" part just a little extreme for some people on the fence, but it did happen mostly off-camera.
After reading the comments it's evident that I'm not interested in the game.
Well the whole storyline begins with being thoroughly dommed (enslaved) by a feisty succubus. Its not just a scene, but the entire premise starts with it.
If that makes some people uncomfortable, they should probably skip over it then. She seems to be central to the plot and will likely reappear again.
But as a hard dom, she is quite the attraction though.
Your description of the game hasn't ignited my desire to play. I would say that it has rather chilled it to the point of freezing. I guess it's best to not even download it.
First I must say that the girls' models look good, but that overview and previews give me the impression that the MC is going to be the typical loser forced to do X thing for X updates until he finally gains some power to say No.(which makes me wonder if this is a femdom/sub focused game?)
So, Dev, how much freedom does the player have?
For example, are kinks/fetishes avoidable (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?
And what about future tags or content, do you have any idea what the game will have, or will it depend on demand? (if possible it would be good to have a list of tags planned)
Anyways good luck.
I mean kinda I guess. So other than Yuna(Pink Succubus) most relationships will be much more "normal". So no, the game in general is not femdom/sub focused. The previews are a little misleading, mostly because almost all the content so far involves Yuna.
My current plan for sex scenes is for the player to choose between a normal scene or a fetish scene. So for example, they can either have a blowjob or a footjob.
Future tags will mostly depend on demand.
Thank you mate
will there be futa
If there's a high demand then yes
Well…I’m currently high . And I demand it
If so, can there be futa-on-male?
Can i fuck and degrade elvyn/human girls into lusty nymphos? Cause if true then i am hooked!