Hello Mr. (or Ms.) Cibbon. I have just finished the latest version of your game and i want to share some of my thoughts on it.
First of all i wanna talk about what is already here, what i like and don't like before i talk what i wish would be expanded on.
I wanna first mention the artstyle and the animations which is what initially drew me to the game. Particularly the animations are very reminiscent of Goddesses' Whim. They are very high quality and full of detail which tends to be a weakness of a lot of other AVNs so i hope it continues in further updates.
I like the overall writing of the game so far. All of the jokes landed for me and i liked the overall presentation and writing choices. I don't love the setup of having five different goddess that each represent one of the five senses ruling over the universe, and the cold war they have over Manaka. I'm not crazy on this setup but it's not a complete deal breaker for me. The characters seem to have interesting and distinct personalities. My personal favourite so far is Belle. I like how she's not just cold and distant, she's acutally serious and straight to business. That kind of personality, particularly on women, has a lot of potential and is quite hard to write, specially when the cracks start to show. I hope it gets the attention it deserves.
I think the pacing of the story so far has been quite adequate. The only part that i think dragged on was the execution scene before our characters arrived. I think something could have been cut without jeopardizing the scene and making it a little less boring. Other than that the rest was fine. Nothing felt rushed or overstayed it's welcome.
There are some interesting ideas in here that i hope get improved on. With the slave knights having powers related to the main five sense that really gives room to some interesting interactions and problem solving from the part of the characters. Specially with the MC's heightened sense of smell. I hope that gets expanded upon and used to solve problems in some out of the box ways in the future.
Manaka having a scarce male population and because of such scarcity men being essentially a protected class in this world opens to a lot of interesting world building possibilties. I hope that there is a satisfactory explanation as to why men are so scarce in this world and i hope that this fact is handled apropriately. For example, in such a world, men wouldn't really be able to take on more dangerous and risky jobs since a man's life would be much more valued. It would also mean that men have a higher market value not only in the job market but also in the dating market since there are literally just less of them. I hope that these societal repercusions of men being scarce are properly thought out.
Something else that i hope gets expanded upon is why and how Fudge knows so much the slave knight contract. Specially the bit about her knowing that anything promised by the goddesses in their own domain gets automatically added to the contract seemed suspicious to me. How could she discover something like that? It might be something incredibly trivial and unimportant but i like seeing little loose like that being tied up.
Anyway that's it for my impromtu review. Thanks for reading all the way through. Excited to hear your response!
I spend a lot of time and effort on the animations and overall design of the characters and being compared to Goddesses Whim is an honor in itself. Thank you very much!
Very happy you like the writing. I try to keep it as engaging as possible while still having a bit of comedy. I can reveal that there is more to the premise than what has been revealed so far and I'm very excited to see if your view changes after that is revealed.
All the things you have listed such as MC's heightened sense of smell, scarce male population, and Fudge's mysterious knowledge will all be expanded upon. I pretty much have the entire outline of the storyline done, so I can promise you that all the little loose ends I'm throwing out will be tied up.
excited to see what's down the pipeline for this one. I also wanted to ask if all sex scenes are going to be optional as a matter of principe moving forward. It seemed to me to be out of character for the option to refuse Fudge's handjob (?) to even be available. I thought that maybe it would have some repercusions on the story but for now it seems like it just avoids the scene with Fudge and nothing else happens.
I plan on making all the more niche fetishes optional. Even though Fudge being the lovable little goofball she is. I know that Slime-girls might not be appealing to everybody. So things like "Slime-girls", "footjobs", "extreme femdom" will never be forced on the player. There will always be another option or skippable. I also don't want to penalize people for skipping things they don't like, so there will never be a bad outcome for skipping such things.
I guess "niche fetiche" is up to interpretation cause that seemed quite tame to me, not enough to warrant the choice but it makes sense. Also i didn't necessarily mean negative repercussions from the choice to refuse, just some repercussion. Like maybe it causes her to act different toward the MC in the future. Or maybe not letting her view our memories changes the relationship in some way.
This is honestly a game that i would stick by and replay every update. its funny with so far a actual story and serious moments. And whether your here for a quick fap or a decent story with hook points it does both at the sametime. please keep up the good work i cant wait to see more of this!
plus you actually made fudge the slime girl be a slime in sex scenes instead of another body with the wristjob?/palmjob?
I want to make all the girls H-scenes feel unique to each other, especially so for Fudge as there's a lot of experimental stuff you can do with slime girls.
After searching up what in the bloody hell Joiplay is and then doing some research. I found that the current version of Joiplay is only compatible with games created with up to version 8.13 of renpy. Succubus Kingdom is created on renpy 8.20 so that's why it doesn't work.
Sadly, nothing I can do to help you there friend, You will just have to wait until the 8.20 version of Joiplay is released and then it will work.
I really liked this, the design of the characters are really good, and don't have that bland default koikatsu look. The sex scenes are fluid and not principally not laggy, probably because of the video codec you used. The story has the cliche isekai premise, but, there's nothing wrong with using cliche premises, they just need to be well developed, and from the current state of the game, it looks like it will be well made. Overall, a great introduction for your game! (Also, I've seem you mention about going towards a sandbox approach, i think a more regular visual novel would fit the best, but, i'm not too against sandbox.)
My initial plan was for the game to turn into a sandbox after the prologue. But whether I'll continue with this plan or keep presenting the story in a normal visual novel format is still undecided.
(Though I'm starting to lean more and more towards the game being a normal visual novel)
Sandbox would be better, though more to code IMO and is partly the reason I supported in the first place. As long as it's done right meaning not done like LiLs "sandbox" but more like HHGs sandbox and doesn't have stat grinds people shouldn't really complain about it, having repeatable scenes and other things to build up the story and characters could only help. A classic VN is pretty much face value on everything and majority of them struggle with pacing everything out.
WOW! I'm not going to lie. This is REALLY good so far. If you keep up this quality, I have no doubts that this will get up there with Harem Hotel and Eternum.
And Yunetai going little head trample on a dogeza ? YESH PLEASE MORE.
Great Mistress, I like where you're going with it, and the animations are gorgeous.
The only thing that feels strange to me is the tattoo on the MC's chest. I can only assume it's his ex's name, but, why would the goddess allow another woman's name written on her Slave-Knight ?
Wonder if there will be a way to reverse things on the succubus... even if it's just a kink thing she allows because it's rare for her. Though a secret usurper route would be interesting too. Still... worth keeping an eye on.
I've been following a few similar projects here and there for a while now, and this so happens to be one of the fastest growing in terms of support for just an initial release that I've seen.
Who knew that so many people out there would find being enslaved by a succubus to be so compelling as a premise.
I will be here for every single new release of content. This has undoubtedly been one of the best entries I have seen on this website hands down. This is a PHENOMENAL foundation, and I'm beyond excited to see what you do with this in the future. (I saw that bisexual option, so I hope to see a femboy in the future. If you add a femboy I swear that I will build a shrine in your honor.)
Do you have a discord? Also the game was suprisingly good for being just like 30 minutes of content, loved the maids and the doctor, and the goddess as well. Animations are clean and satisying too, very high quality for such an unknown game ( no offense intended, meaning because its relatively new ) and honestly looks amazing in every aspect
I've said it in my rating but ill say it here to in case people do not see what i said i highly recommend this game again the story hooks you in from start too finish and makes you want more the animations are one of the best i have ever seen in a game like this and the music matches the settings perfectly there really isn't anything bad i can say about this game and I'm extremely excited to see what's next again keep up the phenomenal work
I must say that I'm impressed , the models are just perfect, keep up the good work, it's just so good, although it's just started. I loved the femdom in the first scene so, will there be more of that? (I must add that I won't force you to add stuff, I'm just asking, I love the game even if you don't add any femdom scene later, but I would say I love to see more of femdom scenes, you can make options for it, for example, you can give the players the choice between seeing a femdom, normal, or a maledom (like blowjob or a footjob) that would do it, and it's just a suggestion, much love)
I hope we get a choice to not follow the succubus I already want her dead. How can you claim to protect and shit on everything earth is. Ill behead her with a shovel
Well this was certainly a spicy femdom story introduction from start to finish. That's a genuine compliment. I did read the other comments, and whether you want to run with that concept is up to you, but it at least did deliver quite excellently there throughout.
But its rare for projects like these to have high-quality animations. While short in length, you can certainly see that there is a lot of latent talent here. If the tempo can be kept, this could be a future contender for one of the big visual novels on Itch.
P.S. this 1-day old VN project ended up being in the number #2 spot for that tag on the front page as of this moment. Certain niche tags shared by other projects are good way to get some hard-to-get visibility. It might also help clear up a lot of confusion about what this project will contain in the future--such as whether its going to be a sandbox, kinetic novel, or a choices matter novel, etc.
I usually rarely comment, but I feel the need to drop a few words. First of all, unlike most Ren'py games comprised of illusion studio game for graphic, this game feels very polished. The developer takes a lot of extra steps to make this game stands out, things like but not limited to :
Animations for NOT ONLY 18+ scenes, but also cutscenes and other story elements
A customized menu
Texts flourish to further emphasize the dialogue and make them more 'alive' (Little things like making them bigger and smaller, etc. The dev explains it best when you boot up a new game
All of these already makes them game very appealing visually, and helps it stands out among the others. I hope this features are kept for future updates. Good job!
The writing so far is also great. It doesn't feel immature or forced, it's enjoyable, written with tact, and leaves the reader rooms for imagination and deduction while still being concise on what the reader needs to know.
There is quite a lot of femdom content for now, but personally I enjoy and prefer them so that's not really a negative, more of a positive for me.
Overall, I feel like this game is full of potential, and is made by someone who would go the extra length to bring out the best in their craft (at least for now). Hope you can keep the ball rolling Cibbon, and best of luck!
Well, on a scale of 1-to-10 difficulty, the main character's situation is 11/10 completely and utterly hopeless long-term for freedom.
The succubus goddess is all-powerful in her pocket dimension. He's already been infected with her mark. Her most zealous and emotionally-bonded servant is literally hovering over his shoulder ensuring compliance with physical force at all times. What few powers the main character has derive from his overlord directly and could probably be taken away on a whim. And he'd also need a way to overcome her ability to influence and reprogram emotions hypnotically. It seems to even be implied that if he rebels, a hex will automatically activate (maybe?) and curse him for eternity, violating the contract he signed.
Compounding everything, there's nothing left of his home to return to. The central government of the kingdom he's been isekai'd to literally worships the person who enslaved him as a deity and as a matter of national identity--the "succubus kingdom" as in the title of this project I'd assume. By extension any followers he recruits there will likely adore her too.
This MC is basically stuck here for the ride and is probably limited to trying to make best and enjoy his situation--plenty of action there. How you'd write a rebellion route out of this, I'd have no clue. At best he could strike a deal with one of the other four supreme beings vying for power, but he'd basically be trading one succubus mistress for another with a new binding contract.
Who knows, maybe with that tagline its like an ancient classical Greek tragedy where the hero tries to break the chains of fate but inevitably fails and is punished constantly by the divine for doing so.
Not everything is always straightforward or even successful.
The only thing more powerful than a Goddess in fictional work, is her writer that wants to see her knocked down a peg.
So the intentions of the writer, are much more important to the direction of the story, than the fictional details of the setting within that story.
And given that the writer has thus far, just... completely ignored my inquiry at all, both times I've asked about, sorta suggest to me that if you're signing up for servicing aforementioned Succubus Mistress, what you are instead signing yourself up for is a big heaping plate of disappointment. Which, you know, as said.. huge bummer, but whatcha gonna do?
Patreon link doesn't seem to link to a proper page.
Overall this storyline seems promising. Good animations. Not sure if its planned to be one of the main focuses of the novel, but based on what exists in this prologue, it ought to have a "femdom" as one of its tags on Itch. The protagonist certainly seems to end up being on the bottom a lot.
Not just the scenes, but the plot, setting, and atmosphere is certainly there for it too.
The main character is literally given the title "slave", is branded, and bullied by a dominant hot succubus-waifu. He gets beaten and dominated by a bunch of battle maids too. They all talk about endurance training him in the future as some sort of foreshadowing. He's on a short leash as he's given his mission. The outer plot has already deep-dived into this theme.
The inner plot too: A hot queen on a throne who doesn't seem to outright deny that she keeps certain assets. The main character rescues someone, but still manages to end up under her anyways! And then followed by a long T&D session out of his control without spoiling anything. And so forth, all while under the scornful gaze of a mean--but well-endowed--goth girl.
Not making a judgement here, just suggesting to keep an open mind as the project tries to find its initial footing that it ticks a lot of boxes to a certain niche taste. Some folks are really into that. Advertising what it already excels at might help build up some initial momentum. Maybe it was unintended (I would guess you were aiming for a corruption theme initially), but accidents can be happy accidents. Don't be afraid to go either way.
Still, will be looking forward to how this story develops with content, routes, options, etc. Good luck!
I imagined Mc was going to be something of a loser, but the way you describe how things happen is worse than I thought haha, thanks for that description.
Its a hard judgement to make. The MC does stand up for himself, but has the rebelliousness physically beaten out of him. His initial emotional weakness from the sudden turn of events is also quite literally hypnotized out of him so he can serve better as both a personal slave toy and a knight.
It's probably too early to call and will depend on future story version beats. But before the whole adventure, he was down on his luck before being whisked away. Its all out of his control now, and there is a small comedy of errors happening because of all these circumstances outside his control.
Yea I honestly am very put off so far with the mc... he is just a cowardly skitish all bark zero bite loser so far. So far it seems he has spent almost the whole time cowering as every female he comes across steam rolls him. The lil sissy cant even see the upsite of being one of only a handful of dudes in an an entire world and spends his time eihter whining about whatever or literally shaking and skeered like a kicked puppy in a back alley.
And is it possible to avoid, that is, not to happen at all, those scenes? If it isn't possible, the truth is that I don't care if they cease to exist later, because being forced to have a single femdom scene is enough for me not to play.
Its basically you got isekai'd, but semi-voluntarily in a coerced fashion. Outside of the whole being enslaved aspect, there's nothing "extreme" if that's what you're worried about, but just know that you're basically starting from zero in terms of power level and you're surrounded by some "superior beings" who have their way with you initially. It kind of sets up the plot if that makes sense, so it'd be a bit weird to skip it. Its mild basically insofar, but omnipresent for the meantime while the MC starts the journey.
I would kind of consider the whole being "almost beaten to death" part just a little extreme for some people on the fence, but it did happen mostly off-camera.
Well the whole storyline begins with being thoroughly dommed (enslaved) by a feisty succubus. Its not just a scene, but the entire premise starts with it.
If that makes some people uncomfortable, they should probably skip over it then. She seems to be central to the plot and will likely reappear again.
But as a hard dom, she is quite the attraction though.
Your description of the game hasn't ignited my desire to play. I would say that it has rather chilled it to the point of freezing. I guess it's best to not even download it.
First I must say that the girls' models look good, but that overview and previews give me the impression that the MC is going to be the typical loser forced to do X thing for X updates until he finally gains some power to say No.(which makes me wonder if this is a femdom/sub focused game?)
So, Dev, how much freedom does the player have?
For example, are kinks/fetishes avoidable (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?
And what about future tags or content, do you have any idea what the game will have, or will it depend on demand? (if possible it would be good to have a list of tags planned)
I mean kinda I guess. So other than Yuna(Pink Succubus) most relationships will be much more "normal". So no, the game in general is not femdom/sub focused. The previews are a little misleading, mostly because almost all the content so far involves Yuna.
My current plan for sex scenes is for the player to choose between a normal scene or a fetish scene. So for example, they can either have a blowjob or a footjob.
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Hello Mr. (or Ms.) Cibbon. I have just finished the latest version of your game and i want to share some of my thoughts on it.
First of all i wanna talk about what is already here, what i like and don't like before i talk what i wish would be expanded on.
I wanna first mention the artstyle and the animations which is what initially drew me to the game. Particularly the animations are very reminiscent of Goddesses' Whim. They are very high quality and full of detail which tends to be a weakness of a lot of other AVNs so i hope it continues in further updates.
I like the overall writing of the game so far. All of the jokes landed for me and i liked the overall presentation and writing choices. I don't love the setup of having five different goddess that each represent one of the five senses ruling over the universe, and the cold war they have over Manaka. I'm not crazy on this setup but it's not a complete deal breaker for me. The characters seem to have interesting and distinct personalities. My personal favourite so far is Belle. I like how she's not just cold and distant, she's acutally serious and straight to business. That kind of personality, particularly on women, has a lot of potential and is quite hard to write, specially when the cracks start to show. I hope it gets the attention it deserves.
I think the pacing of the story so far has been quite adequate. The only part that i think dragged on was the execution scene before our characters arrived. I think something could have been cut without jeopardizing the scene and making it a little less boring. Other than that the rest was fine. Nothing felt rushed or overstayed it's welcome.
There are some interesting ideas in here that i hope get improved on. With the slave knights having powers related to the main five sense that really gives room to some interesting interactions and problem solving from the part of the characters. Specially with the MC's heightened sense of smell. I hope that gets expanded upon and used to solve problems in some out of the box ways in the future.
Manaka having a scarce male population and because of such scarcity men being essentially a protected class in this world opens to a lot of interesting world building possibilties. I hope that there is a satisfactory explanation as to why men are so scarce in this world and i hope that this fact is handled apropriately. For example, in such a world, men wouldn't really be able to take on more dangerous and risky jobs since a man's life would be much more valued. It would also mean that men have a higher market value not only in the job market but also in the dating market since there are literally just less of them. I hope that these societal repercusions of men being scarce are properly thought out.
Something else that i hope gets expanded upon is why and how Fudge knows so much the slave knight contract. Specially the bit about her knowing that anything promised by the goddesses in their own domain gets automatically added to the contract seemed suspicious to me. How could she discover something like that? It might be something incredibly trivial and unimportant but i like seeing little loose like that being tied up.
Anyway that's it for my impromtu review. Thanks for reading all the way through. Excited to hear your response!
Helo
I spend a lot of time and effort on the animations and overall design of the characters and being compared to Goddesses Whim is an honor in itself. Thank you very much!
Very happy you like the writing. I try to keep it as engaging as possible while still having a bit of comedy. I can reveal that there is more to the premise than what has been revealed so far and I'm very excited to see if your view changes after that is revealed.
All the things you have listed such as MC's heightened sense of smell, scarce male population, and Fudge's mysterious knowledge will all be expanded upon. I pretty much have the entire outline of the storyline done, so I can promise you that all the little loose ends I'm throwing out will be tied up.
excited to see what's down the pipeline for this one. I also wanted to ask if all sex scenes are going to be optional as a matter of principe moving forward. It seemed to me to be out of character for the option to refuse Fudge's handjob (?) to even be available. I thought that maybe it would have some repercusions on the story but for now it seems like it just avoids the scene with Fudge and nothing else happens.
I plan on making all the more niche fetishes optional. Even though Fudge being the lovable little goofball she is. I know that Slime-girls might not be appealing to everybody. So things like "Slime-girls", "footjobs", "extreme femdom" will never be forced on the player. There will always be another option or skippable. I also don't want to penalize people for skipping things they don't like, so there will never be a bad outcome for skipping such things.
I guess "niche fetiche" is up to interpretation cause that seemed quite tame to me, not enough to warrant the choice but it makes sense. Also i didn't necessarily mean negative repercussions from the choice to refuse, just some repercussion. Like maybe it causes her to act different toward the MC in the future. Or maybe not letting her view our memories changes the relationship in some way.
Any foot fetish content planned/in game already? Love the style of the anims. Hats off to you good sir.
Not yet, but there will be foot content in the future(always optional)
Thank you!
Awesome, I am excited to see it. Especially if the models will have pedicures. Also you're welcome :)
This is honestly a game that i would stick by and replay every update. its funny with so far a actual story and serious moments. And whether your here for a quick fap or a decent story with hook points it does both at the sametime. please keep up the good work i cant wait to see more of this!
plus you actually made fudge the slime girl be a slime in sex scenes instead of another body with the wristjob?/palmjob?
Thank you!
I want to make all the girls H-scenes feel unique to each other, especially so for Fudge as there's a lot of experimental stuff you can do with slime girls.
Is android port planned?
Yes it is
I hope in few weeks or in few months. i want play it on my Smartphone bc i dont have a PC 🫠
am i a spy or am i your teams spy?
or am i a scout
Okay, played the new version, Fudge is just the cutest, it's great.
As usual, animations, poses, everything looks so clean it's super great, thank you for your work.
Is there impreg?
No and for the time being, no plans on adding it as well
Can't you make it run in joiplay app for phone? Because I tried it but it didn't work using joiplay and it doesn't have an android version.
After searching up what in the bloody hell Joiplay is and then doing some research. I found that the current version of Joiplay is only compatible with games created with up to version 8.13 of renpy. Succubus Kingdom is created on renpy 8.20 so that's why it doesn't work.
Sadly, nothing I can do to help you there friend, You will just have to wait until the 8.20 version of Joiplay is released and then it will work.
I really liked this, the design of the characters are really good, and don't have that bland default koikatsu look. The sex scenes are fluid and not principally not laggy, probably because of the video codec you used. The story has the cliche isekai premise, but, there's nothing wrong with using cliche premises, they just need to be well developed, and from the current state of the game, it looks like it will be well made. Overall, a great introduction for your game! (Also, I've seem you mention about going towards a sandbox approach, i think a more regular visual novel would fit the best, but, i'm not too against sandbox.)
Sandbox mode will be optional right? or will you be changing the entire game to sandbox mode, like no visual novel mode/linear mode?
My initial plan was for the game to turn into a sandbox after the prologue. But whether I'll continue with this plan or keep presenting the story in a normal visual novel format is still undecided.
(Though I'm starting to lean more and more towards the game being a normal visual novel)
Sandbox would be better, though more to code IMO and is partly the reason I supported in the first place. As long as it's done right meaning not done like LiLs "sandbox" but more like HHGs sandbox and doesn't have stat grinds people shouldn't really complain about it, having repeatable scenes and other things to build up the story and characters could only help. A classic VN is pretty much face value on everything and majority of them struggle with pacing everything out.
I'm at a loss of words. 0.2 was pure genius on so many levels. My insides hurt from laughing so hard.
Also green girl is now new best friend <3. Hope we get to see her and the succubus more soon.
Thanks a lot, glad you liked it!
Fudge best girl <3
Will there be an android version?
Yes, there will be an android version in a future update
Ok, the previews of the game looks amazing! can't wait
WOW! I'm not going to lie. This is REALLY good so far. If you keep up this quality, I have no doubts that this will get up there with Harem Hotel and Eternum.
Thank you! I will never let the quality drop
Can't wait to play this amazing game, going to wait until more updates come out first ^_^
Take care and good luck with future updates!!
Truly an epic update. Marvelous. That exceeded my expectations.
This visual novel will go very far someday as one of the great titles on Itch.io.
Great stuff !
And Yunetai going little head trample on a dogeza ? YESH PLEASE MORE.
Great Mistress, I like where you're going with it, and the animations are gorgeous.
The only thing that feels strange to me is the tattoo on the MC's chest. I can only assume it's his ex's name, but, why would the goddess allow another woman's name written on her Slave-Knight ?
Wonder if there will be a way to reverse things on the succubus... even if it's just a kink thing she allows because it's rare for her. Though a secret usurper route would be interesting too. Still... worth keeping an eye on.
how dare you plot against your mistress like that...
you should feel grateful to serve her for all eternity...
but I do agree, she hot though. One might certainly feel the temptation at times...
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Very soon friend
I hear faint whispers from the other side. We must continue the ritual.
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Love love love this, am super excited to see where this will go in the future.
I've been following a few similar projects here and there for a while now, and this so happens to be one of the fastest growing in terms of support for just an initial release that I've seen.
Who knew that so many people out there would find being enslaved by a succubus to be so compelling as a premise.
I will be here for every single new release of content. This has undoubtedly been one of the best entries I have seen on this website hands down. This is a PHENOMENAL foundation, and I'm beyond excited to see what you do with this in the future. (I saw that bisexual option, so I hope to see a femboy in the future. If you add a femboy I swear that I will build a shrine in your honor.)
Definitely in the top 1% of quality games.
Why i can't play in joiplay?
Do you have a discord? Also the game was suprisingly good for being just like 30 minutes of content, loved the maids and the doctor, and the goddess as well. Animations are clean and satisying too, very high quality for such an unknown game ( no offense intended, meaning because its relatively new ) and honestly looks amazing in every aspect
Too short but really high quality. Future is promising
I've said it in my rating but ill say it here to in case people do not see what i said i highly recommend this game again the story hooks you in from start too finish and makes you want more the animations are one of the best i have ever seen in a game like this and the music matches the settings perfectly there really isn't anything bad i can say about this game and I'm extremely excited to see what's next again keep up the phenomenal work
I must say that I'm impressed , the models are just perfect, keep up the good work, it's just so good, although it's just started. I loved the femdom in the first scene so, will there be more of that? (I must add that I won't force you to add stuff, I'm just asking, I love the game even if you don't add any femdom scene later, but I would say I love to see more of femdom scenes, you can make options for it, for example, you can give the players the choice between seeing a femdom, normal, or a maledom (like blowjob or a footjob) that would do it, and it's just a suggestion, much love)
I hope we get a choice to not follow the succubus I already want her dead. How can you claim to protect and shit on everything earth is. Ill behead her with a shovel
you feel a bit too strongly about this, how about you take a walk
I don't see very many VN's with the ability to change ur skin color, if this could be added it would make the experience that much better
i dont mean to be picky, i just fell it would add to the overall depth of the story! ;)
Well this was certainly a spicy femdom story introduction from start to finish. That's a genuine compliment. I did read the other comments, and whether you want to run with that concept is up to you, but it at least did deliver quite excellently there throughout.
But its rare for projects like these to have high-quality animations. While short in length, you can certainly see that there is a lot of latent talent here. If the tempo can be kept, this could be a future contender for one of the big visual novels on Itch.
P.S. this 1-day old VN project ended up being in the number #2 spot for that tag on the front page as of this moment. Certain niche tags shared by other projects are good way to get some hard-to-get visibility. It might also help clear up a lot of confusion about what this project will contain in the future--such as whether its going to be a sandbox, kinetic novel, or a choices matter novel, etc.
I really like the visuals of the game but i have a doubt is this game heavy femdom focused or you can avoid that scenes ?
its about succubus its gonna have femdom
I usually rarely comment, but I feel the need to drop a few words. First of all, unlike most Ren'py games comprised of illusion studio game for graphic, this game feels very polished. The developer takes a lot of extra steps to make this game stands out, things like but not limited to :
All of these already makes them game very appealing visually, and helps it stands out among the others. I hope this features are kept for future updates. Good job!
The writing so far is also great. It doesn't feel immature or forced, it's enjoyable, written with tact, and leaves the reader rooms for imagination and deduction while still being concise on what the reader needs to know.
There is quite a lot of femdom content for now, but personally I enjoy and prefer them so that's not really a negative, more of a positive for me.
Overall, I feel like this game is full of potential, and is made by someone who would go the extra length to bring out the best in their craft (at least for now). Hope you can keep the ball rolling Cibbon, and best of luck!
Thank you so much!
I can assure you that this level of quality will continue
"...or will you remain as her obedient servant?"
So is that actually a route you're planning, or just part of the tag line?
Win win either way
Speaking personally, it'll be more of a win for me if that is an option, than if it isn't
Though I'm starting to feel like, it isn't an option, which is a huge bummer actually
Well, on a scale of 1-to-10 difficulty, the main character's situation is 11/10 completely and utterly hopeless long-term for freedom.
The succubus goddess is all-powerful in her pocket dimension. He's already been infected with her mark. Her most zealous and emotionally-bonded servant is literally hovering over his shoulder ensuring compliance with physical force at all times. What few powers the main character has derive from his overlord directly and could probably be taken away on a whim. And he'd also need a way to overcome her ability to influence and reprogram emotions hypnotically. It seems to even be implied that if he rebels, a hex will automatically activate (maybe?) and curse him for eternity, violating the contract he signed.
Compounding everything, there's nothing left of his home to return to. The central government of the kingdom he's been isekai'd to literally worships the person who enslaved him as a deity and as a matter of national identity--the "succubus kingdom" as in the title of this project I'd assume. By extension any followers he recruits there will likely adore her too.
This MC is basically stuck here for the ride and is probably limited to trying to make best and enjoy his situation--plenty of action there. How you'd write a rebellion route out of this, I'd have no clue. At best he could strike a deal with one of the other four supreme beings vying for power, but he'd basically be trading one succubus mistress for another with a new binding contract.
Who knows, maybe with that tagline its like an ancient classical Greek tragedy where the hero tries to break the chains of fate but inevitably fails and is punished constantly by the divine for doing so.
Not everything is always straightforward or even successful.
The only thing more powerful than a Goddess in fictional work, is her writer that wants to see her knocked down a peg.
So the intentions of the writer, are much more important to the direction of the story, than the fictional details of the setting within that story.
And given that the writer has thus far, just... completely ignored my inquiry at all, both times I've asked about, sorta suggest to me that if you're signing up for servicing aforementioned Succubus Mistress, what you are instead signing yourself up for is a big heaping plate of disappointment. Which, you know, as said.. huge bummer, but whatcha gonna do?
Patreon link doesn't seem to link to a proper page.
Overall this storyline seems promising. Good animations. Not sure if its planned to be one of the main focuses of the novel, but based on what exists in this prologue, it ought to have a "femdom" as one of its tags on Itch. The protagonist certainly seems to end up being on the bottom a lot.
Yeah the Patreon page is currently under review, Hopefully, it will soon be up and running
I agree that the first scenes have been very femdom focused, but the rest of the game will have less of that.
Not just the scenes, but the plot, setting, and atmosphere is certainly there for it too.
The main character is literally given the title "slave", is branded, and bullied by a dominant hot succubus-waifu. He gets beaten and dominated by a bunch of battle maids too. They all talk about endurance training him in the future as some sort of foreshadowing. He's on a short leash as he's given his mission. The outer plot has already deep-dived into this theme.
The inner plot too: A hot queen on a throne who doesn't seem to outright deny that she keeps certain assets. The main character rescues someone, but still manages to end up under her anyways! And then followed by a long T&D session out of his control without spoiling anything. And so forth, all while under the scornful gaze of a mean--but well-endowed--goth girl.
Not making a judgement here, just suggesting to keep an open mind as the project tries to find its initial footing that it ticks a lot of boxes to a certain niche taste. Some folks are really into that. Advertising what it already excels at might help build up some initial momentum. Maybe it was unintended (I would guess you were aiming for a corruption theme initially), but accidents can be happy accidents. Don't be afraid to go either way.
Still, will be looking forward to how this story develops with content, routes, options, etc. Good luck!
I imagined Mc was going to be something of a loser, but the way you describe how things happen is worse than I thought haha, thanks for that description.
Its a hard judgement to make. The MC does stand up for himself, but has the rebelliousness physically beaten out of him. His initial emotional weakness from the sudden turn of events is also quite literally hypnotized out of him so he can serve better as both a personal slave toy and a knight.
It's probably too early to call and will depend on future story version beats. But before the whole adventure, he was down on his luck before being whisked away. Its all out of his control now, and there is a small comedy of errors happening because of all these circumstances outside his control.
Yea I honestly am very put off so far with the mc... he is just a cowardly skitish all bark zero bite loser so far. So far it seems he has spent almost the whole time cowering as every female he comes across steam rolls him. The lil sissy cant even see the upsite of being one of only a handful of dudes in an an entire world and spends his time eihter whining about whatever or literally shaking and skeered like a kicked puppy in a back alley.
And is it possible to avoid, that is, not to happen at all, those scenes? If it isn't possible, the truth is that I don't care if they cease to exist later, because being forced to have a single femdom scene is enough for me not to play.
If you're on the fence about trying it:
Its basically you got isekai'd, but semi-voluntarily in a coerced fashion. Outside of the whole being enslaved aspect, there's nothing "extreme" if that's what you're worried about, but just know that you're basically starting from zero in terms of power level and you're surrounded by some "superior beings" who have their way with you initially. It kind of sets up the plot if that makes sense, so it'd be a bit weird to skip it. Its mild basically insofar, but omnipresent for the meantime while the MC starts the journey.
I would kind of consider the whole being "almost beaten to death" part just a little extreme for some people on the fence, but it did happen mostly off-camera.
After reading the comments it's evident that I'm not interested in the game.
Well the whole storyline begins with being thoroughly dommed (enslaved) by a feisty succubus. Its not just a scene, but the entire premise starts with it.
If that makes some people uncomfortable, they should probably skip over it then. She seems to be central to the plot and will likely reappear again.
But as a hard dom, she is quite the attraction though.
Your description of the game hasn't ignited my desire to play. I would say that it has rather chilled it to the point of freezing. I guess it's best to not even download it.
First I must say that the girls' models look good, but that overview and previews give me the impression that the MC is going to be the typical loser forced to do X thing for X updates until he finally gains some power to say No.(which makes me wonder if this is a femdom/sub focused game?)
So, Dev, how much freedom does the player have?
For example, are kinks/fetishes avoidable (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?
And what about future tags or content, do you have any idea what the game will have, or will it depend on demand? (if possible it would be good to have a list of tags planned)
Anyways good luck.
I mean kinda I guess. So other than Yuna(Pink Succubus) most relationships will be much more "normal". So no, the game in general is not femdom/sub focused. The previews are a little misleading, mostly because almost all the content so far involves Yuna.
My current plan for sex scenes is for the player to choose between a normal scene or a fetish scene. So for example, they can either have a blowjob or a footjob.
Future tags will mostly depend on demand.
Thank you mate
will there be futa
If there's a high demand then yes
Well…I’m currently high . And I demand it
If so, can there be futa-on-male?
Can i fuck and degrade elvyn/human girls into lusty nymphos? Cause if true then i am hooked!